Question by mimi199331: my homework need checking !!! ( the other half of this in the bottom)?
so……. here is my “creative writing” it based on a comic
plz check the grammer and make it story like
thanx
p.s. dont change the beginning my teacher said it has to be that way
when i stepped in the gate way of my school there is only only two things in my mind, pertection and intellgence.
my goal of my life is to make all the people from my school think i am the closest think to perfect. even though i am more than perfect. i have achieved my goal ever since kidergarden.
every day when i step into my classromm the first i heared is compliment from my following class mate like, ” Oh my god! Jina you are so perfect! you are like the most perfect model student. ” i ended up hearing it everyday. They say i am pretty . kind. good at sport, and always at top of the class, by the way i am all that.
So, i guess that is what they all think i am. Well, i am to them, but i real life i am not. At home i am lazy, dirty, self center. in anothre word i am a
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Answer by Lexy
when i stepped in the gate way of my school there is only only two things in my mind, perfection and intelligence.
my goal of my life is to make all the people from my school think i am the closest thing to perfect. even though i am more than perfect. i have achieved my goal ever since kindergarten.
every day when i step into my classroom the first i heard is compliment from my following class mate like, ” Oh my god! Jina you are so perfect! you are like the most perfect model student. ” i ended up hearing it everyday. They say i am pretty . kind. good at sports, and always at top of the class, by the way i am all that.
So, i guess that is what they all think i am. Well, i am to them, but i real life i am not. At home i am lazy, dirty, self center. in another word i am a …
I didn’t check the grammar but i sure did use spell check!
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